http://www.williamlehman.net/the-incident the greatest gift you can give to the world is your own intimacy with God Wed, 11 Aug 2010 18:32:24 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 http://www.williamlehman.net/the-incident/comment-page-1#comment-1444 William Lehman Thu, 05 Mar 2009 16:53:25 +0000 http://www.williamlehman.net/?p=3394#comment-1444 hey Sheldon? hey Sheldon?

]]> http://www.williamlehman.net/the-incident/comment-page-1#comment-1443 sheldon mencer Thu, 05 Mar 2009 03:06:14 +0000 http://www.williamlehman.net/?p=3394#comment-1443 hey william hey william

]]> http://www.williamlehman.net/the-incident/comment-page-1#comment-1442 GW Tue, 03 Mar 2009 17:12:34 +0000 http://www.williamlehman.net/?p=3394#comment-1442 Oh, and I love the part about him having to endure poison ivy in the heat of summer being the worst punishment he could endure. That would be pure misery! Oh, and I love the part about him having to endure poison ivy in the heat of summer being the worst punishment he could endure. That would be pure misery!

]]> http://www.williamlehman.net/the-incident/comment-page-1#comment-1441 GW Tue, 03 Mar 2009 17:10:48 +0000 http://www.williamlehman.net/?p=3394#comment-1441 The descriptions are vivid and I can see the kids as they muck about in the old house and try to pry the cellar door open. This is good, William. I like how Adam turns out to be the narrator's alter ego. The only thing that picks at my suspension of belief is that Adam/narrator accumulated keys from the old house in the year they played there, but never tried them in the lock. He seems too smart a kid not to run out to the lock and try each new key as he finds it, you know? Maybe omitting the part about him finding keys in the house would be better? The descriptions are vivid and I can see the kids as they muck about in the old house and try to pry the cellar door open. This is good, William. I like how Adam turns out to be the narrator’s alter ego. The only thing that picks at my suspension of belief is that Adam/narrator accumulated keys from the old house in the year they played there, but never tried them in the lock. He seems too smart a kid not to run out to the lock and try each new key as he finds it, you know? Maybe omitting the part about him finding keys in the house would be better?

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